The Burn

swirling in
as a
flame

Christy B says:

11/20/2017 at 10:07 am

The power of someone else over us can be so all-consuming… Great metaphor with the flame.

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1. Robert Matthew Goldstein says:
  
  11/22/2017 at 5:49 pm
  
  Thanks Christy. I think I wrote this in 1976 – It’s one of the few early pieces I can bear to read. 🙂
  
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paula graham says:

11/19/2017 at 4:08 am

Fabulous work from your fertile mind.

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1. Robert Matthew Goldstein says:
  
  11/19/2017 at 11:35 am
  
  Thanks Paula. This is one of my first poems, or at least it’s one of the first I considered a real poem.
  
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