This eternal moment,
an immaculate conception
of sweaty hips & lips;
such innocence, such bliss.
Graphic and Poem (c) Rob Goldstein 2019
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This eternal moment,
an immaculate conception
of sweaty hips & lips;
such innocence, such bliss.
Graphic and Poem (c) Rob Goldstein 2019
Comments are closed.
Totally love this post. Very inspiring. Have a wonderful weekend.
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Thank you for the visit and comment, Kally. It’s always good to see you.
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Likewise, the pleasure is mine.
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Reblogged this on Survivors Blog Here.
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So much feeling, from so few words, Rob. Thanks for adding one of my forever favorite songs too. Hugs.
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This was Elton John’s real coming out. This song and Daniel.
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This is terrific, Rob. Beautifully written.
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Thank you, Robbie. It feels good to be writing new work.
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Very descriptive words, Rob! Sweaty hips and lips….That paints a picture!
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Super poem, Rob. Such innocence indeed.
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Thank you, John.
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Yea, melancholic look back to the days of innocence.
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I don’t think of it as melancholy, Paula, but I may not be aware of all of the feelings the poem is designed to evoke.
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Those four lines gave such a complete picture, Rob. Great poem.
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Thanks Denise. I’m glad the poem works.
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It does!
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🙂
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